Writing Comp! [Y U Flag stories are Hopscotch related .-. All participants move to Different topic .-.]

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#1

Hey! I'm LotsaPizza :pizza: :pizza: :pizza: on Hopscotch, and if you know me, you probably also know that I love writing! Right now, I want to see how everyone writes, so I'm holding a comp like @Snoopy! In @Snoopy's comp, I came in second place. Here are the requirements:

1. I need a sample!

I need a sample of your writing before admission! No, I am not letting you in based on that, I just want to see how you improve, how you write, and your favorite genre.

2. Fill out the following form:

Username:
Favorite Genre: (Horror, Comedy...)
Nonfiction, fiction or realistic fiction:
Age or Grade:
What do you do on Hopscotch: (Draw, wander...)

3. Put the following form in front of each entry for each round:

Title:
Genre:
Author:

4. ENJOY!

Don't take this as a competition but as an opportunity to share your writing!

I will grade based on...

Grammar, spelling, punctuation, and how well-written it is!

Here is a sample of how to enter:
Username: LotsaPizza :pizza: :pizza: :pizza:
Genre: Horror, Action
Nonfiction, fiction or realistic fiction: Fiction
Age or Grade: Age 10, 5th grade
What do I do on Hopscotch: Draw, Code and Write a bit.

Title: Excerpt from The Hopergent Runnner
Genre: Mixed Horror/Action
Author: LotsaPizza :pizza: :pizza: :pizza:
“Is that written in blood?!” I shriek. Time stares at me, clearly disappointed.
“What do you know?” He pushes. I stop and think.
“It’s all a game,” I blurt out. He stares at me again, his mouth curling up.
“What… did you say?” He asks, snarkily.
“It’s all a game,” I blurt again, slamming my hand to my head. Time snickers.
“If it’s all a game…” He pushes me again.
“The world is virtual——the danger is real. Not really, though. Like, we can die, but we won’t really die in real life, unless we take the Virt out of our brains.” I’m getting annoyed of how easily Time is getting me to talk.
“So, what is this Virt?” he asks, leaning against the wall with the note in his hand.
I just stand in shock, staring.
He lifts himself up, eyebrows raised. “What’s up, Seven? You okay?”
“DATIP!” I screech. Time flicks around, face-to-face with a fleshy Datip. He steps back and grabs my hand.
“Run on three,” he whispers through clenched teeth. “One, two…” A pause.
“THREE!”

Good Luck!

~LP


Writing Comp: Topic 2 [RubyStars, VanillaOwl, and CreativeCoder, You Made it to Round Three!]
#3

Can you use a story you have made already?


#4

For entry purposes, yes. Just make sure you include Excerpt from!


#5

I don't quite understand that! Can I use a book I have made for the judging book? @LotsaPizza


#7

Username: Friendship Studios/friendship2468
Fav. Genre: usually realistic fiction or fantasy
Genre: Realistic fiction
Age, grade: I'm 9 and in fourth grade
I draw wander code and report bad projects
Sample (you have to read all of the chapters so sink in the stuff):


#8

Do I need to give you an example? You have three 3+ paged stories-in-progress you can read already..


#9

Um...
Okay. So, for entering, you can use a pre-written story. But for rounds, you need to either write from scratch or make sure you use a story that fits the theme!


#10

Nah, you don't cause I have your writing :wink:


#11

Ok I am doing a series so I just need to make another story!


#12

Follow4LikesOfficial
Sci-Fi/Horror
Fiction
Not revealing, but I'm older than 10, in middle school
Host competitions, make people feel good with likes, give shoutouts, music stuff, help community

Title: Zombie Apocolypse
Genre: Horror/Humor
Written a year ago

Mild Language

Los Angeles, California Friday September 25th, 1:59 PM
I was about to get on my first plane ride! To where you ask? Hawaii! The airport was amazing. "What terminal are we in?" I asked my mom. "Terminal 4" She replied. I danced the troll dance all the way to our terminal. My brother was too busy not caring to notice. I was sitting at our terminal, very excited. Then, I looked over my shoulder, and saw that terminal one was full of people screaming, and something red. Maybe it was a party! The iPhone 6S just came out after all.

Excitedly, I boarded the plane. When we were on the runway, waiting to take off, I glanced at the terminal 3 plane and saw the most disgusting thing ever. A green, reddish group of things with blood caked around their mouths. They were devouring the brains of the capitan. His guts were splattered all across the runway, and the completely demolished body was twitching. One of them didn't have an arm, and another with out an eye. I looked away, and closed the window. "This is crazy! These cannibals! OMG! Are they on a diet or something? OMG!" I thought but then paused. "Probably an ad lel". Excited that it was in a ad, I took a picture of it. Soon enough, we took flight.

After one hour, the plane was steady until 3000 feet, then it started shaking rapidly. Turbulence, I thought. I opened my window, only to see something that was green, and had a missing eye and arm. I watched as he punched through the plane window, and pounced."OMG PICK ME PICK ME IM A HUGE FAN PLS PLS" I could hear a passenger yell. The thing pounced. Not on me, but on my mother. She took her pocket knife, and stopped her own heart, ending the horror before the worst came. The blood was trickling down her, but the thing didn't stop, he ripped out her chest, then her throat, me watching as... an actor? The zombie head is indulged in my mother, and soon there was nothing left. He looked at me, then pounced on the person across the aisle.

Then I realized it. This wasn't an ad from Apple. It was a threat attack because we didn't buy their products! The zombie thing ripped out her right lung, and munched on it happily. I looked out the window, and saw the zombies jumping at the plane by the thousands. One zombie rips out one of the flight attendant's head and after he was finished devouring the brains he chucked the head out the window. Then the zombie looked right into my eyes, and I jumped out the window. I realized I didn't have a parachute so I used my clothes. I landed on top of a zombie and the first sight of me must have shocked him. I looked up, watching the plane I
was on catching on fire, and plummeting out of the sky.

I knew I was going to die. I knew that there were no islands in the middle of Hawaii and Los Angeles. But wait! Out of the corner of my eye, I saw something gree- oh wait that's a zombie. The fire was burning my clothes I was using as a parachute. Soon, there was nothing left but ashes. As I fell into the ocean, I thought: "Wait, how did they even get onto our plane, and where's my brother??"


#13

Okay...

Username: Creative Coder
Favorite Genre: (Horror, Comedy...): Horror, fantasy
Nonfiction, fiction or realistic fiction: Fiction
Age or Grade: 7th grade
What do you do on Hopscotch: (Draw, wander...): Variety of coding projects


#14

Age/grade:10, grade4
Username: PercyJackson9
What I do: I make projects, report the innopropreat ones, remix for learning. I give credit.
My submit ion is kind of long (2211 words) but it is not finished.

Piper

I always knew he was different, I remember when he was less than half a year old when he learned to walk a few weeks later he learned to talk. At age 2 he could do a 500 piece puzzle in a mater of minutes. He learned to read at age 3, the funny thing is his first book he read was The Odyssey by homer. Now he is 8 years old and has skipped 2nd grade so he is in 4th grade just like me. He could skip more grades but the teachers think he needs to be more social with the other kids.
"Piper get on your coat and shoes we need to go to a special place for Leo, you might like to bring your homework or a book." My mom yelled from downstairs interrupting my thinking.
"I'm coming." I shouted back
I grab my special homework( I do because everything is too easy so I make myself some) and a book called, The Son Of Neptune by Rick Riordan. I slip on some shoes and get a fleece since it is not tOo cold. I get into the car and buckle up, I lean over to do Leo's seat Belt because he does not like too do it himself.
"Mom where are we going?" I ask.
"We are going to a special place for Leo and you ." Replied my mom.
When we got to the as my mom called, "doctors office" a man named Dr. Badina cheeked us in and brought us to a waiting room. In the waiting room there was a DS, wii system, video games, and a bench for reading. This is the strangest waiting room because there is only 4 kids and 2 adults. I sit down on the bench and Leo goes over to something I didn't spot it looks like a computer, I walk over to Leo.
"Hay, what are you doing on that computer?" I asked my brother"Nothing, why?" Replied Leo.
"I just want to know but that's okay if you don't tell me." I explained to him.
Than a women's voice came over the loudspeaker, I saw a bunch of those kids that were on the DS and wii system shrieked and covered there ears. Even Leo covered his ears.
"Would Leo Valdez please come to the front desk."
"Leo and Piper come on we can go to the front desk,'' my mom said talking to Leo mostly because he was not even budging. We finally got Leo to get up and come with us to the front desk.
"Hi you must be Leo, Mrs. Valdez, and are you Piper Leo's sister?" Asked the doctor Dr. Badina.
We fallow the doctor into a special room with toys, blocks, puzzles, and a ton of other stuff. The plaque outside the door says, " IQ testing#45
"Doc what does that sign mean?" I ask with a pretend puzzled face. I am pretty sure they are testing my little brother for his IQ.
They take Leo in the room and close the door, I wonder if they are testing Leo for IQ.
"Mom, can I watch Leo's thing because I am studying autism tests"-
"What am I doing here" Leo explodes in a fit of anger
He starts trying to kick my mom and is squirming out of my poor moms grip.
"Let me deal with him I am quite used to this type of thing." Dr. Badina explains to my mom
The doc grips my brother with a firm grip but does not hurt Leo, he whispers something in Leo's ear but I can only hear some of it. Leo.... Oath.... Promise .... Come with.... And lastly calm.
"Okay, fine but only if you promise I will like it." Leo says back to the doc and follows him.
I wonder what's going on.

Leo

Look, I know I am different. I have always been and I guess now I except it, I skipped 2nd grade because I wanted to. I wanted more of a challenge but 3rd grade did not give me that. Than something new that my school was finally using excited me so much a literally yelled with excitement. My school was going to do MAP testing. My friend Peter does those tests at his school and says it is hard. I am so excited and giddy the first day of MAP testing, my sister was scared but I knew she would do pretty good because she is smart just not as smart as I am. The tests were a disappointment. They were too easy and just happened too see some of the stuff that a girl named Racheli did and I swear I almost started yelling the answers to her. Surprisingly she still got it wrong. Then I slipped,
"Ohh Racheli the answer you just got wrong well the answer is 2, 45, A and 890. I yelled. I started yelling.
"Leo, calm down." A voice I had never heard before did this grip thing ant told me to fallow him.
"My name is Mr. Berosole and you name is Leo?" He asked me in a kind voice
"Leo Valdez." I reply quietly.
"Hi, how was the testing?" He asked in a overly cheery way.
"Easy, but okay guess." I answed in that same quiet voice.
"How did Racheli get that answer wrong, it is so obvious. The question was what's 456-411 which is obviously 45 and then a bunch of other easy questions." I say but almost start yelling.
"What kind of questions did you get?" Mr. Berosole asked
"Easy stuff like answer this equation and the equation was 11234+5754=? But than it got a little harder with stuff like what is next in the sequence, 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21,34,55? Which by the way the answer is 89." I say really fast.
"So you want a challenge?" He asked pretending to be puzzled
"Yup!" I exclaim happily
"How would a couple of tests work so I can see some work to give you some harder work?" He asked me.
"Okay, sure" I answer.
"Awesome!!" He tells me in that over cheer full voice.
"Can I please go back to the tech room to finish my MAP testing?"
"No, but you can finish it in a room with some other kids like you." He declared in a stern voice.
"Go to the office and say I sent you and to lead you to room 395." He says kindly.
I walk away and just now am I starting too take in what just happened. What does he mean by kids like me am I in trouble. All of those thoughts swirled around in my head like a dizziness potion had been put on me. I was surprised I could even walk in a straight line.

Piper

The doctor takes Leo by the arm and walks him into the room I start to read my book I get to my favorite part when another man comes but this time he goes to my mom.
"Hi, my name is Dave Derokoo and I see that you have an appointment for a girl." Says a young man no older than 35.
"Yes I do, it's for my older daughter Piper." My mom says to Mr. Derokoo.
" Piper please come with me." Says the man.
I get up and carry my book while he keeps on telling me that my mom can hold my book. We finally get to a room with the number 244. He opens the door and I walk in. There are two chairs one is a fancy chair and the other is a plastic blue one. I go for the blue one but Mr. Derekoo beat me to it.
"You can sit in a blue or the fancy chair." He says in a flat tone of voice.
"Is it okay if I sit in the blue chair." I ask in a really innocent voice.
I sit in a blue chair and look at Mr. Derekoo and look straight in his eyes. They are different colors, one is darkish blue and one is light brown.

Leo

I went to the front desk ant told them all of the info that man had told me to. They( Dr. Deeret and Mrs. Cusada) told me to go to the room across from the cafeteria. I walked there and it took exactly 238 steps to get to room 395. In the room a lady who looks fresh out of her college year stops and says-
"Well hello, you must be Leo Valdez. My name is Miss.Tamogan." She says in a surprising British accent.
"Hi, Miss. Tamogan." I said giddy wanting too see inside the classroom.
I got to finally come in the room and it was awesome, there was rolly-desks, 16 computers and a bunch of awesome stuff. Then I noticed a boy in my class who saw me in the classroom and started laughing his head off. That was when I knew I did not want to be caught in room 395. I got to go on the computer for 20 minutes and when I got off it was 3:15 and I needed to go back to my classroom. As usual my mom was the 2nd in line I rave to the cat but Piper beat me too it. When we get home mom says that we need to get into the car in 10.5 minutes and puts a timer on. I get out of the car to grab a comic book. I pick up an old time favorite Adventure Cat and Adventure Bug #5.
"Time to get in the car!!" Shouts my mom
"Coming" both me and Piper say at the exact same moment.
We got into the car and I sit down in my seat.
"Help?!?!?" Askes Piper.
"Uh huh!' I reply and she reaches forward to do it.
The car ride was about 15 minutes long and when we were finished I got out and ran into the building. A man stopped me and asked my name. I told him it was Leo and escorted me to a waiting room. I instantly find a computer and go on it. I find my favorite website and go on it. After 6.45 minutes a loudspeaker announces that I should come up. A woman named Dr. Berosole takes me to a room I do not want to go in. Then she whispers something in my ear.
"I heard you do not like easy stuff, this will be fun but challenging I promise." She tells me in a whispery voice.
"Fine." I reply in a small voice.

Piper

The strange man took me into the room and I sat in the blue chair.
"So do you know why you are doing in this room, don't you?" He asked in a voice that my English teacher would call a "awkward" Voice.
"What, I don't know." I Reply.
"Well your mom and the school would like to know your IQ." he said in a scientific voice.
"Can we start, like NOW." I tell him
"Sure." He says and hands me a packet of paper and a lot of different stuff.
How is it going to work... What will my IQ be... Will it be high... Will it be low... Is it average....those throats swirled through my head while i took the test. I only remember one question—how much longer. I had asked him.
"Only 5 more questions Piper, keep it up you can do it!" Mr. Derekoo replied to my question.
The last question was this...
"And finally question #350.. " he said but I had already stopped listing, all I was doing was answering... Answering... And answering.
"Good job Piper, your test is now over." He said to me.
"Finally that was the hardest test I ever took!" I said back in a exhausted but happy voice.
I got out of my blue chair and walked/jogged over too my mother and my father who apparently had just came back from work.
"Papa how did the experiment turn out." I asked him.
"Good!" He replied.
"How was the test honey." My mom asked.
"Hard but Okay, I guess." I say trying not to look too tired.
"Mrs.Valdez, Mr.Valdez Leo is done with his test. A woman came out with Leo in her hands( not literally.).
"Leo, how was the test?" My mom asked.
"A let down, too easy." He said not trying too sound snobby but he did kind of sound like a little genius.
"The scores will be handed out tomorrow, your schools will get them." The lady told my parents.
"Thank you, so much." My parents told them and walked out the door and we got in the blue suburban.

Leo

"That guy lied to me." I told my parents as I got in the car
"How did he LIE." Asked my mom.
"He told me that the test would be hard but it was so easy." I complain.
"Well it was espoused to be hard." Piper said a little annoyed with me.
It was not hard but I think I did okay. That was al I thought about for the rest of the night.
T


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#15

Hi!
So, link to my writing
(If you are on The Hopergent Runner you've probably seen it before..


And form:
Username: Giraffedolphin26 :dolphin:
Genre: Science fiction, dystopian fiction, fantasy
Nonfiction, fiction, or realistic fiction: Fiction
Age or grade: 13, 8th grade
What I do on hopscotch: draw, code, play


#17

Username: Gilbert189
Genre: Horror, Action
Realistic Fiction
Age/Grade: 12, 6th Grade
What I do on Hopscotch: Code and collab

Title: Excerpt from "Hiding"
Genre: Horror, Action
Author: Gilbert189

Hiding. Is that really how all of this started? All of these events? Everything, was it all really started my me? Me being too scared? I guess I was too scared. So instead, I hid. I didn't fight. I ran.

I woke up. All seemed like a normal day, everything going as planned. My shiny red alarm clock buzzed, and it buzzed until I finally decided to get up.
I managed to drag myself out of my bed and into the bathroom. I stood there, looking at myself in the mirror. Are all the people at school right? Am I really as worthless as they think I am? I manage to shove the thought into the back of my mind, but it lingers there. I turn the handle and icy cold needles sting me, as if they were attacking. I stand in the shower, just contemplating what would happen today. Probably nothing eventful. As I am getting dressed, a thought occurs to me. Today is different. I can't pinpoint exactly why, but all I know is that my world just feels... empty. I rush downstairs to make sure my family is safe.
"Jess! Mom! Are you okay?" I ask.
No response.
I'm sprinting down the hall, trying desperately to get myself to believe everything is okay. But I can't. Because it's not. All over the living room, tiny glass shards are scattered on the floor. I know this can't be happening.
I can't really remember much after that. All I know is that my mom and sister, the only family that I know of, were taken. I didn't go and run for help. I didn't call for help. Instead, I made a mistake. I was scared, and I ran back upstairs. I didn't know what to do. So I hid.


#18

Question: How will we keep this hopscotch related?


#19

Entries will be Hopscotch-Related ONLY, or else you are disqualified.


#20

1 minute until I can like again

So intense

Ok I guess. But we are posting the entries on the forum, right?

Or left?


#21

Maybe on mod-approved days such as holidays we can have free writing as well.


#22

Hey, @PercyJackson9, do you mind some constructive criticism?


#23

Name: PercyJackson9
Fave. Genera: realistic fiction
Age:10
Grade:4
What I do on hopscotch: make games, report users, remix for good.

Tittle: the child with the IQ of a genius
Genera: realistic fiction
Author: PercyJackson9

Piper

I always knew he was different, I remember when he was less than half a year old when he learned to walk a few weeks later he learned to talk. At age 2 he could do a 500 piece puzzle in a mater of minutes. He learned to read at age 3, the funny thing is his first book he read was The Odyssey by homer. Now he is 8 years old and has skipped 2nd grade so he is in 4th grade just like me. He could skip more grades but the teachers think he needs to be more social with the other kids.
"Piper get on your coat and shoes we need to go to a special place for Leo, you might like to bring your homework or a book." My mom yelled from downstairs interrupting my thinking.
"I'm coming." I shouted back
I grab my special homework( I do because everything is too easy so I make myself some) and a book called, The Son Of Neptune by Rick Riordan. I slip on some shoes and get a fleece since it is not tOo cold. I get into the car and buckle up, I lean over to do Leo's seat Belt because he does not like too do it himself.
"Mom where are we going?" I ask.
"We are going to a special place for Leo and you ." Replied my mom.
When we got to the as my mom called, "doctors office" a man named Dr. Badina cheeked us in and brought us to a waiting room. In the waiting room there was a DS, wii system, video games, and a bench for reading. This is the strangest waiting room because there is only 4 kids and 2 adults. I sit down on the bench and Leo goes over to something I didn't spot it looks like a computer, I walk over to Leo.
"Hay, what are you doing on that computer?" I asked my brother"Nothing, why?" Replied Leo.
"I just want to know but that's okay if you don't tell me." I explained to him.
Than a women's voice came over the loudspeaker, I saw a bunch of those kids that were on the DS and wii system shrieked and covered there ears. Even Leo covered his ears.
"Would Leo Valdez please come to the front desk."
"Leo and Piper come on we can go to the front desk,'' my mom said talking to Leo mostly because he was not even budging. We finally got Leo to get up and come with us to the front desk.
"Hi you must be Leo, Mrs. Valdez, and are you Piper Leo's sister?" Asked the doctor Dr. Badina.
We fallow the doctor into a special room with toys, blocks, puzzles, and a ton of other stuff. The plaque outside the door says, " IQ testing#45
"Doc what does that sign mean?" I ask with a pretend puzzled face. I am pretty sure they are testing my little brother for his IQ.
They take Leo in the room and close the door, I wonder if they are testing Leo for IQ.
"Mom, can I watch Leo's thing because I am studying autism tests"-
"What am I doing here" Leo explodes in a fit of anger
He starts trying to kick my mom and is squirming out of my poor moms grip.
"Let me deal with him I am quite used to this type of thing." Dr. Badina explains to my mom
The doc grips my brother with a firm grip but does not hurt Leo, he whispers something in Leo's ear but I can only hear some of it. Leo.... Oath.... Promise .... Come with.... And lastly calm.
"Okay, fine but only if you promise I will like it." Leo says back to the doc and follows him.
I wonder what's going on.

Leo

Look, I know I am different. I have always been and I guess now I except it, I skipped 2nd grade because I wanted to. I wanted more of a challenge but 3rd grade did not give me that. Than something new that my school was finally using excited me so much a literally yelled with excitement. My school was going to do MAP testing. My friend Peter does those tests at his school and says it is hard. I am so excited and giddy the first day of MAP testing, my sister was scared but I knew she would do pretty good because she is smart just not as smart as I am. The tests were a disappointment. They were too easy and just happened too see some of the stuff that a girl named Racheli did and I swear I almost started yelling the answers to her. Surprisingly she still got it wrong. Then I slipped,
"Ohh Racheli the answer you just got wrong well the answer is 2, 45, A and 890. I yelled. I started yelling.
"Leo, calm down." A voice I had never heard before did this grip thing ant told me to fallow him.
"My name is Mr. Berosole and you name is Leo?" He asked me in a kind voice
"Leo Valdez." I reply quietly.
"Hi, how was the testing?" He asked in a overly cheery way.
"Easy, but okay guess." I answed in that same quiet voice.
"How did Racheli get that answer wrong, it is so obvious. The question was what's 456-411 which is obviously 45 and then a bunch of other easy questions." I say but almost start yelling.
"What kind of questions did you get?" Mr. Berosole asked
"Easy stuff like answer this equation and the equation was 11234+5754=? But than it got a little harder with stuff like what is next in the sequence, 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21,34,55? Which by the way the answer is 89." I say really fast.
"So you want a challenge?" He asked pretending to be puzzled
"Yup!" I exclaim happily
"How would a couple of tests work so I can see some work to give you some harder work?" He asked me.
"Okay, sure" I answer.
"Awesome!!" He tells me in that over cheer full voice.
"Can I please go back to the tech room to finish my MAP testing?"
"No, but you can finish it in a room with some other kids like you." He declared in a stern voice.
"Go to the office and say I sent you and to lead you to room 395." He says kindly.
I walk away and just now am I starting too take in what just happened. What does he mean by kids like me am I in trouble. All of those thoughts swirled around in my head like a dizziness potion had been put on me. I was surprised I could even walk in a straight line.

Piper

The doctor takes Leo by the arm and walks him into the room I start to read my book I get to my favorite part when another man comes but this time he goes to my mom.
"Hi, my name is Dave Derokoo and I see that you have an appointment for a girl." Says a young man no older than 35.
"Yes I do, it's for my older daughter Piper." My mom says to Mr. Derokoo.
" Piper please come with me." Says the man.
I get up and carry my book while he keeps on telling me that my mom can hold my book. We finally get to a room with the number 244. He opens the door and I walk in. There are two chairs one is a fancy chair and the other is a plastic blue one. I go for the blue one but Mr. Derekoo beat me to it.
"You can sit in a blue or the fancy chair." He says in a flat tone of voice.
"Is it okay if I sit in the blue chair." I ask in a really innocent voice.
I sit in a blue chair and look at Mr. Derekoo and look straight in his eyes. They are different colors, one is darkish blue and one is light brown.

Leo

I went to the front desk ant told them all of the info that man had told me to. They( Dr. Deeret and Mrs. Cusada) told me to go to the room across from the cafeteria. I walked there and it took exactly 238 steps to get to room 395. In the room a lady who looks fresh out of her college year stops and says-
"Well hello, you must be Leo Valdez. My name is Miss.Tamogan." She says in a surprising British accent.
"Hi, Miss. Tamogan." I said giddy wanting too see inside the classroom.
I got to finally come in the room and it was awesome, there was rolly-desks, 16 computers and a bunch of awesome stuff. Then I noticed a boy in my class who saw me in the classroom and started laughing his head off. That was when I knew I did not want to be caught in room 395. I got to go on the computer for 20 minutes and when I got off it was 3:15 and I needed to go back to my classroom. As usual my mom was the 2nd in line I rave to the cat but Piper beat me too it. When we get home mom says that we need to get into the car in 10.5 minutes and puts a timer on. I get out of the car to grab a comic book. I pick up an old time favorite Adventure Cat and Adventure Bug #5.
"Time to get in the car!!" Shouts my mom
"Coming" both me and Piper say at the exact same moment.
We got into the car and I sit down in my seat.
"Help?!?!?" Askes Piper.
"Uh huh!' I reply and she reaches forward to do it.
The car ride was about 15 minutes long and when we were finished I got out and ran into the building. A man stopped me and asked my name. I told him it was Leo and escorted me to a waiting room. I instantly find a computer and go on it. I find my favorite website and go on it. After 6.45 minutes a loudspeaker announces that I should come up. A woman named Dr. Berosole takes me to a room I do not want to go in. Then she whispers something in my ear.
"I heard you do not like easy stuff, this will be fun but challenging I promise." She tells me in a whispery voice.
"Fine." I reply in a small voice.

Piper

The strange man took me into the room and I sat in the blue chair.
"So do you know why you are doing in this room, don't you?" He asked in a voice that my English teacher would call a "awkward" Voice.
"What, I don't know." I Reply.
"Well your mom and the school would like to know your IQ." he said in a scientific voice.
"Can we start, like NOW." I tell him
"Sure." He says and hands me a packet of paper and a lot of different stuff.
How is it going to work... What will my IQ be... Will it be high... Will it be low... Is it average....those throats swirled through my head while i took the test. I only remember one question—how much longer. I had asked him.
"Only 5 more questions Piper, keep it up you can do it!" Mr. Derekoo replied to my question.
The last question was this...
"And finally question #350.. " he said but I had already stopped listing, all I was doing was answering... Answering... And answering.
"Good job Piper, your test is now over." He said to me.
"Finally that was the hardest test I ever took!" I said back in a exhausted but happy voice.
I got out of my blue chair and walked/jogged over too my mother and my father who apparently had just came back from work.
"Papa how did the experiment turn out." I asked him.
"Good!" He replied.
"How was the test honey." My mom asked.
"Hard but Okay, I guess." I say trying not to look too tired.
"Mrs.Valdez, Mr.Valdez Leo is done with his test. A woman came out with Leo in her hands( not literally.).
"Leo, how was the test?" My mom asked.
"A let down, too easy." He said not trying too sound snobby but he did kind of sound like a little genius.
"The scores will be handed out tomorrow, your schools will get them." The lady told my parents.
"Thank you, so much." My parents told them and walked out the door and we got in the blue suburban.

Leo

"That guy lied to me." I told my parents as I got in the car
"How did he LIE." Asked my mom.
"He told me that the test would be hard but it was so easy." I complain.
"Well it was espoused to be hard." Piper said a little annoyed with me.
It was not hard but I think I did okay. That was al I thought about for the rest of the night.
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