Sneak Peak Of My Story!

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#1

So, many of you know I'm writing a story in Hopscotch. I'm not the best at writing, so it won't be that good. Do you wanna have a sneak peak? Well, here are some pictures! Please give some feedback! I am finishing Sky's part/point of view, and starting Dawn's part!





If you want me to tag you when it's out, like this topic so I know who you are. I don't want to keep saying yes to "can you tag me when it's out?"


#2

Looks really fun!!! Looking forward to it!!! Can you tag me when it's out???


#3

Sure! Thanks for the compliment!


#4

I can't wait! And I'm a main character too! Can you tag me also when it is out? :smile:


#5

Yay that is such an amazing story so far keep up the great work
Can you tag me when it's out please


#6

Yes! I love tagging people. I will also be tagging every character in my book, and give the link here.


#7

Why didn't you add my name


#8

cuz I memorized it. Hheheheh, do u want me to put it on?


#9

Some advice:
So I just left Sky when we went to high school ? Man I'm mean

Could make the chapters a big longer

Just an extra feature: Could you add a page number? Thanks
Edit: Can you also tag me when it's out? Thanks


#10

I don't want to make the chapters too long. If people are reading it, it will take the, FOREVER! I'm planning to make like 10-20 chapters or so. Yea, you left Sky. And yes, I will tag you, and I am adding a page number at the end. This will take me a long time.


#11

U used my book name! Can I get a little credit for that?


#12

I love the code in that, and excited for the story. I'm also writing a story (The Lost Trail of The Ghost of Sundrown Village), and do you mind if I used your book idea as inspiration for mine. It's really creative! I won't copy any code, and you will get inspiration credit in the credit section! Let me know what you think!


#13

This is related to the story so please don't flag:
Last night I had a dream that I had 2 real life copies of this book :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:


#14

looks really fun!! please tag me it when its out :smiley: