Help please? (DinoProductions)

help

#1

Hey,
I'm coding a trail art lemonade and before I publish it, I need constructive criticism. Also, can you feel me what to add.
It looks boring.
Here's a screenshot of the lemonade:


People that I especially want feedback from:
@KVJ
@Intellection74
@FeatherDance
@MathGirl
@SmilingSnowflakes
Thanks :slight_smile:
ExtraStuffs

Thanks for supporting me! Special Shoutous to these people:
@KVJ - he was the first person to follow me.
@Himynameismeredith1 - she was the first person to welcome me.
@Intellection74
@Mathgirl
@FeatherDance
@Kitkat26
P.S: I didn't answer to all of you because I ran out of replies. It should be back in a few hours or maybe now :3

Sincerely,
DinoProductions™


#2

This looks awesome! The color of the lemonade is spot-on! Maybe the bottom of the glass could be slightly curved?


#3

Thanks! Is there any other thing I can fix?


#4

Erm... idk though...srsly have nuuu idea....
Try tagging the OMTL?
Edit: I'll halp u


#5

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#6

Add bubbles!
And a drinking straw (thx google translate)


#7

Thanks the ideas @CatWithABrush and @Madi_Hopscotch_
Thanks for putting the OMTL @Hero_Dino


#8

Maybe curve the bottom more.


#9

Okay!
Thanks for suggesting!


#10

It's looks real xD it's really good


#11

Well, I know next to nothing about trail art, but maybe my OCD skills can help :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:. Right. As everyone said, the bottom should
be rounder, and also I think the top should be more oval-ish. It's got something to do with sine cosine, I'm sure, but again, I know next to nothing about it. Maybe ask @KVJ about sine cosine stuff. Also, I think the handle should have more... "Circle" to it, you know? Like, don't make it exactly a semi circle. As for what you can add, I recommend straws and bubbles, as @CatWithABrush said. It may be a lot, but no worries! Take it one step at a time, and learn from other people's projects!


#12

@DinoProductions, it looks super good! I think you should curve the bottom like everyone said, and add a straw. Also, I think the lemonade would look better if it was a little brighter, but idk.


#13

I think that you might want to add an umbrella in the lemonade, you know, just to spice it up a bit.

I also think you can add a backround, maybe a beach, sunset, or just a sun.

It'll look good with any backround that goes.

And, maybe take off Lemonade or make it shrink.


#14

Oh, oh! Also, since it's lemonade, we'll add in... A slice of lemonade. Slice. A slice. Not two slices, not three slices, but, a slice. Um, I think I'll show myself out of the door.


#15

Looks awesome!!

Thanks for tagging me and for the shoutout!


#16

Woah! That looks awesome. :0


#17

Hai


#18

@KVJ herro.

Anyways, you should fix the perspective. It looks all off. At the top, it looks you are looking in, and then, at the bottom, it's flat.


#19

It looks great! :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
Perhaps add a coded lemon in the top right or left hand corner?


#20

Maybe you could add little bubbles?