Help please? (DinoProductions)



I'm coding a trail art lemonade and before I publish it, I need constructive criticism. Also, can you feel me what to add.
It looks boring.
Here's a screenshot of the lemonade:

People that I especially want feedback from:
Thanks :slight_smile:

Thanks for supporting me! Special Shoutous to these people:
@KVJ - he was the first person to follow me.
@Himynameismeredith1 - she was the first person to welcome me.
P.S: I didn't answer to all of you because I ran out of replies. It should be back in a few hours or maybe now :3



This looks awesome! The color of the lemonade is spot-on! Maybe the bottom of the glass could be slightly curved?


Thanks! Is there any other thing I can fix?


Erm... idk though...srsly have nuuu idea....
Try tagging the OMTL?
Edit: I'll halp u




Add bubbles!
And a drinking straw (thx google translate)


Thanks the ideas @CatWithABrush and @Madi_Hopscotch_
Thanks for putting the OMTL @Hero_Dino


Maybe curve the bottom more.


Thanks for suggesting!


It's looks real xD it's really good


Well, I know next to nothing about trail art, but maybe my OCD skills can help :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:. Right. As everyone said, the bottom should
be rounder, and also I think the top should be more oval-ish. It's got something to do with sine cosine, I'm sure, but again, I know next to nothing about it. Maybe ask @KVJ about sine cosine stuff. Also, I think the handle should have more... "Circle" to it, you know? Like, don't make it exactly a semi circle. As for what you can add, I recommend straws and bubbles, as @CatWithABrush said. It may be a lot, but no worries! Take it one step at a time, and learn from other people's projects!


@DinoProductions, it looks super good! I think you should curve the bottom like everyone said, and add a straw. Also, I think the lemonade would look better if it was a little brighter, but idk.


I think that you might want to add an umbrella in the lemonade, you know, just to spice it up a bit.

I also think you can add a backround, maybe a beach, sunset, or just a sun.

It'll look good with any backround that goes.

And, maybe take off Lemonade or make it shrink.


Oh, oh! Also, since it's lemonade, we'll add in... A slice of lemonade. Slice. A slice. Not two slices, not three slices, but, a slice. Um, I think I'll show myself out of the door.


Looks awesome!!

Thanks for tagging me and for the shoutout!


Woah! That looks awesome. :0




@KVJ herro.

Anyways, you should fix the perspective. It looks all off. At the top, it looks you are looking in, and then, at the bottom, it's flat.


It looks great! :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
Perhaps add a coded lemon in the top right or left hand corner?


Maybe you could add little bubbles?