Feedback on draft


#1

So I'm working on this character inspired by @Intellection74 @Mathgirl and a doodle. It's very early on, so it will change a lot. But what? Not sure what to do! Can I have help? Here's the thing:


#2

It's really cool! Maybe you could add some more details? :smile:


#3

Its pretty good, maybe make it smile, add arms and legs, and animate it!


#4

I will, as I said, I just started. Needs a lot. But what exactly?

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I think that you need an outline of da square and some highlight in da eyes.
@StarryDream


#5

Wow, this is very cool so far! Are you using a reference image or was this made out of your imagination? Is there something specific you want this to turn out looking like? Are you using a certain art style?


#6

Thanks! This is my imagination. I have no idea where it's going. Mostly, I'm trying to get it to look good. @Intellection74


#7

Okay. Just wondering. Hm... Maybe try to center the eyes and mouth a bit. Other than that, I'd just say to have fun with it! Do whatever you think fits. That's the fun of designing- you can do whatever you want! :smiley:


#8

I like the sad look in it's eyes.
Maybe you could add feet with toenails and have it wear headphones.


#9


Small improvements that made a huge difference.


#10

@Intellection74 @Stradyvarious any ideas on how to fill the mouth?


#11

You could fill the mouth a pink skin color and make a small crease down the center to make it look like a tongue


#12

Ok. I just lost all progress when my iPad died. I'm really bummed right now. @Rodrigo @liza @thomas @Montoya @Meg any way you could save it?


#13

NOOOOOOO! That was so cool


#14

I hate when that happens! It was so cute D:


#15

Ok. I re did it. What do you think? @Themasterofairjitzu @Intellection74 @Stradyvarious


He is reminding me of oh noes on khan academy.


#16

I could of used sin and cos to challenge myself, but I didn't.


#17

Should I add more?


#18

@BellaWafflez17 @StarryDream @ThePickle


#19

Awesome! You should center the face, though! =D


#20

That is looking really good! Maybe add some eyebrows, arms, legs and a hat/hair?
Animations will also look cool!