Eval on logo for feedback?



Can you guys help evaluate a logo I made? I really need your feedback because, I will use it to make even more logos. Thanks for your support
My logo is the HP logo for the 2016 Spectre Laptop with a new logo redesign.
Here is the real logo.

And here is my interpretation of the logo

Please give me feedback!


Smaller, different colours and a smooth background!


Here's a link to the real project