Eval on logo for feedback?

logos

#1

Can you guys help evaluate a logo I made? I really need your feedback because, I will use it to make even more logos. Thanks for your support
My logo is the HP logo for the 2016 Spectre Laptop with a new logo redesign.
Here is the real logo.

And here is my interpretation of the logo


Please give me feedback!


#2

Smaller, different colours and a smooth background!


#3

Here's a link to the real project
https://c.gethopscotch.com/p/xx7si0g0k