Christmas Story! (NO COLLAB)

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#1

I'm making a Christmas story, which I will hopefully be done by tomorrow since today's Chrustmas Eve. But I will be publishing sneak peeks, too!

Credit to @CreativeCoder for idea
Chapter 1-2 (They get longer)


#2

It's christmas day...


#3

@AHappyCoder where do you liv e?


#4

New Zealand!


#5

@AHappyCoder oh, I'm in NYS
No wonder.......YOU WILL GET IT ON DAY AFTER CHRISTMAS THEN


#6

Ok...Ok...!


#7

SNEAK PEEK!!!


BTW, I'm waiting for tomorrow to put up the full thing because I'm done


#8

And another......


#9

Peice.... It's spelled piece and infront is 2 words. In front


#10

Besides spelling it's really good! Also you forgot a quotation mark before "Can" in chapter 2


#11

@DancingLollipop what? I can't even spot the word "Can" in chapter 2!!!


#12

I meant chapter 1! Oops!!


#13

Ohhhh, oops! Thank you for pointing that out!!!


#14

No problem! You have really good writing with just some spelling errors


#15

@DancingLollipop thanks SO much!!! I always knew I had a trick with storytelling/making, I just forget a few English Language rules every now and then. I think I remember my first story, it was a series of books. I think I called it "Caterpillar and Butterfly". Basically, a Caterpillar and a Butterfly committing Personififcation. I was so young, I had my sister write the words.....man, was she a pain........