-art feedback? how can hito improve?-


#1

Hi I just want to know what peeps think of my art, please be honest and tell me how I can improve! I won't feel sad!


#2

Your art is pretty good! :D

Some tips:

  • Work on shading a little more??
  • Value needs to stay on track
  • Hair is good, but an outline would be useful
  • More details in face?
  • Maybe blend/smudge shading more often??

I'm BerryFOX on Hopscotch. You may know me? ^^


#3

Maybe ask for this constructive criticism in the drawing topic instead? A lot of topics like this would be better in there.


#4

Okay, I am new to the forum, so I still don't know these things
(BTW, I love your projects, you rock!)


#5

Thx! Yes I knows u, your projects are awesome!
( sorry for chatting on your CaliPad )


#6

Oh, no problem! Just a reminder!!!! I didn't really expect you to know. XD

(Thank you!!!!!!!!)


#7

You do? That's surprising. :00

thank you so much! I love your projects too.

No, it's fine. I'm happy that you like it!


#8

Thanks! ( okay that's good!)


#9

Oh lawd @BerryFOX!
I just spent an hour chatting on your pad!
I Am soooo Sorry!


#10

@WhoNeedsAName, Hi you probally wont see this


#11

Nope! I did! Well, now i have to do at least twenty letters.


#12

Oh ma lawd! I got on The Forum at The exactly same time as u!!! Wut?!


#13

Well den! Here we are! Hehe! My iPads almost dead so ya


#14

What percent? Are u charging it?


#15

Ya. Its actually at 50 now. Hehe.


#16

Rlly? Mines at 88, and i an charging it, I Am still in my pajamas XD


#17

Mehe. Wait WUT we chatted for almost 2 hours and its at 88? :scream:


#18

I was charging it The entire time.... XD.


#19

-sighs I dont think ahead of time.


#20

Mwehehehehehehheheh I dont know in case you havent noticed, I Am weird