Any Advice on how to improve?


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This is my #HHC2016 project,
https://c.gethopscotch.com/p/ybcj5uc5x
Could you give me some comments or questions?

How do you rate the project?

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#2

Much wow!
Idk how it could improve.


#3

One word : Wow!
It's seriously so cool!


#4

@SmilingSnowflakes and @Madi_Hopscotch_ any comments?
why are some of my senpai here? :flushed::no_mouth::grin:


#5

This background is amazing! It runs pretty fast and smooth and I really like how you have different things related to Halloween! Nice job!


#6

WOAHSHSWNHANHQ :000000

ITS AMAZING WOAH

That's awesome! ;u;


#7

Great Job! I think you are very good at backgrounds. I just can't really think of any constructive criticism :o


#8

Senpai @SmilingSnowflakes likes my project faints


#9

BTW, what does ;u; mean? Sorry if I sound like I don't know anything


#10

Anyone else?


#11

;u; is a happy crying face. :D


#12

Awesome project! I would say you could make the things more evenly spaced out (Maybe this is intentional, how it is currently) so that everything lines up nicely like in a grid. Also, I think cauldrons are shorter, like in the picture below:

Other than that, it's amazing and I rated it 9!


#13

Any more advise? :slight_smile:


#14

Hey senpai!!!!
I love ur project btw


#15

Thanks frenapai!


#16

Haha that's a cool combination